Thursday 1 March 2012

Finished Animation


Hammerspace (unfinished) from Lee Cooper on Vimeo.

This is my finished animation. It is a "silent movie" with music composed by Veronina, and it has been prevued by my class. For a focus group I will attempt to show the animation in a school and receive feedback from the appropriate focus groups. 
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  1. CREATIVE MEDIA & PHOTOGRAPHY5 March 2012 at 13:34

    this has some wonderful strengths Lee - well done - the character develops well and I enjoys the humour in it
    I think that it is too long and as a consequence it loses pace in the middle - i think you need to cut some of the repeat door action down - this will help edit out the uneven lighting

    I would also consider changing the audio a little - perhaps vary volume/add some sound effects as it needs to amplify / support the action more than at present
    At the moment i think that it is a B grade piece but a re-edit to make it more powerful/pacy and refine uneveness in the quality could raise it to an A grade quite easily

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